QUICK THOUGHTS ON OBAMA'S SPEECH

To choose a favorite talking head buzz phrase, I think Barack Obama did what he had to do tonight. And he did it quite well. First, closing a convention that erred too far on the side of nice (that means you, Mark Warner), Barack Obama came out swinging against John McCain, and I think he managed to do it in a way that's hard to characterize as "nasty" or "shrill" or "too angry," unless you're one of the people who characterizes Democrats that way for a living. He crossed that threshold John Kerry or Al Gore never quite did, where you take on political opponents with a toughness that suggests you could take on enemies as President. And he maintained his sense of humor while doing it. Second, Obama also addressed the imaginary lack of specificity in his policy proposals (the only thing more imaginary may be the desire among voters to hear specifics of policy proposals) by laying out a series of them (including improvements to the bankruptcy law that his running mate helped worsen). He had to do it; it's good that he did. But it's an especially silly expectation coming from a press corps that lets John McCain continue praising himself for having championed policies he currently opposes. It's a good sign that the speech gets compared to a State of the Union address (or is that too presumptuous!). Third, Obama talked about his own story, not in the linear way he has in the past and others have at this convention, but by explicitly comparing experiences in his life to experiences of Americans he's met. Of course it's sad that he has a higher bar to clear here than would a White candidate. That said, he did a compelling job connecting Americans' stories and his own and explaining how they inform where he'll take the country. And the uplift was there too. As for the disappointment, of course some of the self-consciously non-that-kind-of-Democrat stuff (are we reinventing government again?) is bothersome. And in a speech that was more aggressive than we've come to expect from Democratic nominees, there was some needless defensiveness. If you're going to talk about the importance of fatherhood, why say it's something we "admit"? Aren't you undercuttng yourself? Why say "Don't tell me Democrats won't defend America," as though you concede that that's the perception - and why respond to the criticism you brought up by naming presidents from forty years ago? Obama seems unable to help himself from rehearsing potential counterarguments in a way that doesn't really help him - as in "Some people will say that this is just a cover for the same liberal etc..." And I think Obama made himself seem a little smaller when he followed talking about the struggles his family has overcome by protesting that he's not a celebrity. Finally, while he effectively seized the high ground on patriotism, it seems overly restrictive for Obama to say he won't suggest that McCain takes his policy positions with any eye to political expediency - I hope he doesn't really mean that part, which would seem to leave John Kerry's "Senator McCain v. Candidate McCain" line of attack off limits.